Saturday, February 11, 2012

Randomness

Diamond..

Eternal love, he promised...
It was a big diamond :)
Not 10 carats but almost 2 :)

He was up to some good  work
"Duty"kar rahe hai..
Madam is a little off
He forgot their anniversary

Googling for ways to send the valentine gift
long distance doesn't offer chance to kiss and make up
Choclates, he knitted his brows...
Girls! he gasped..


3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Came across your blog today. An interesting read. Your writing style is a bit too repetitive though. You could work on the ... , I don't know what they mean at the end of every other line. You sound like a die hard romantic, a little more serious stuff would make you sound less of a lovey dovey teenager(what you want to sound like is up to you of course). Yet your writing is powerful and enigmatic at times, enough to hook readers onto it. You could use your writing to convey other feelings besides loneliness and love. Anyway, I'll be frequenting your blog once in a way.

Vidwata said...

thanks, for reading. And primarily letting me know that you read. And I had to delete those 3 dots after the very first sentence :)

Candid feedback, I must say. I have few readers, mainly because I don't like to advertise. Die hard romantic, perhaps.

I sometime wish I had a reader who would always provide feedback. Writers thrive on feedback! This blog has now metamorphosed into my extended monologue, if that makes sense. Therefore, there are repetitions of loneliness and love!

Anonymous said...

Will try to be that reader who always provides you feedback. Thanks for your honesty.